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5th September 2019 at 9:38 pm #87355
JustKeepSinging
ParticipantI wrote this a while ago but it still rings true for me…
Exit night, enter light
The sandman’s been visiting
Bringing nightmares again
When I wake, they don’t fade
They just drive me insaneAll my worst fears
Played out in my head
I can’t ever escape them
Even out of my bedThey flaunt my inadequacy
They highlight my flaws
There’s no need for their malice
Whatever the causeWhen it’s quiet, they shout
“It’s all your fault you know”
But life carries on
So I just put on a showI can’t put them down
I carry these dark thoughts all day
If someone asks ‘what’s wrong?’
I can only push them awayHow can I explain?
How can I show them the fear?
The doubt they would ever understand
Keeps me from allowing them nearIt’s nighttime again
I’m afraid to close my eyes
Scared of what I might find
In my dreams again this nightThe sandman’s been visiting
Bringing nightmares again
Tell me..
Will I ever escape from this pain? -
6th September 2019 at 10:58 am #87408
EbonyRaven
ParticipantThat puts it so well, and really clearly.
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6th September 2019 at 3:12 pm #87419
JustKeepSinging
ParticipantThank you ER 🙂 x
I am feeling quite poetic today too but I’m also angry and there’s only so much that rhymes with f**k! or t**t?!
Lol (sorry my dark sense of humour is also out today)
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6th September 2019 at 3:27 pm #87422
KIP.
ParticipantLove it. I had a nightmare again last night. Hasn’t happened for a while but rattled me.
Here’s some rhyming words
He’s clean out of luck and can go get to f***
I’m feeling quite flat because of that t**tSorry 😂
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6th September 2019 at 4:04 pm #87425
HopeLifeJoy
ParticipantLove it too, both of your poems
Feeling quite miserable today so laughing helpedHere’s my little contribution;
Crying, laughing and swearing all at the same time
I am not poetic but I think this rhymes
I’d rather drown some of my whine
In getting myself a glass of fine wine
Than spending time thinking of that swine-
6th September 2019 at 9:56 pm #87466
JustKeepSinging
ParticipantGENIUS KIP!! Love it – am in that kind of mood today….grrrrrrr…
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6th September 2019 at 7:04 pm #87438
HunkyDory
ParticipantI love it JustKeepSinging. It’s great how we can express our feelings about what we’ve been through with poetry ( and toilet humour in my case). HopeLifeJoy that’s great! Whine wine and swine… genius! 😂 xx
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6th September 2019 at 9:10 pm #87456
HopeLifeJoy
Participant😄
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6th September 2019 at 10:18 pm #87468
HunkyDory
ParticipantKIP I missed yours! Brilliant 😂 ok while we’re on a roll…
My husband, he thought he was it
In fact he was just full of sh*t
He might think I’m a cow
Coz I’m happier now
Because I found the strength and I quit! Yay!
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