5th February 2020 at 9:50 am #97127
ON THE EDGE
we are on a precipice
ready to fall
one wrong move
and we lose all
of this fragile relationship
for what it’s worth
we are tumbling down
towards the earth
wher we’ll land wit a bump
if we don’t take care
because soon you’ll turn round
and i wont be there.
5th February 2020 at 8:47 pm #97183LisaMain Moderator
Thank you for sharing Gran
6th February 2020 at 8:55 pm #97254fizzylemParticipant
I like the last two lines the best gran! Thanks for sharing xx
7th February 2020 at 10:11 am #97267HunkyDoryParticipant
Thanks Gran, I like this a lot xx hope you’re ok x
7th February 2020 at 3:47 pm #97278[email protected]Participant
❤️hope you ok gran xxxx
7th February 2020 at 8:00 pm #97299HopeLifeJoyParticipant
Beautiful poem Gran.
Do jump off the cliff, but arm yourself with a parachute, let him jump from it without one.
In concrete terms that means, make your exit plans without him knowing anything about it and go get your freedom whilst he rots in his own hell.
Keep posting & take good care of yourself 💕
13th February 2020 at 3:59 pm #97616self loveParticipant
Hi my son jumped off a cliff, no one should jump off a cliff.
Leaving those behind in so much pain.
I hope you seek help if you feel suicidal.
My son regrets it (spiritualist churchiest been that low but I’m glad I’ve hung on.
Take care all x
16th February 2020 at 10:29 am #97809
thank you all for your comments, i wrote that poem at a low point, my marriage can get very difficult but i probably wont leave him after all this time, we are now at the final stages of life and i guess i just hope i can have a few healthy years without him. i believe he is mentally ill, not evil.self love i am so sorry about your loss, i too have lost a treasured child to suicide and understand your pain lots of love to everyone love gran x*x
16th February 2020 at 1:17 pm #97818HopeLifeJoyParticipant
Sefl love I am terribly sorry about my comment, I can see it is really inappropriate, I hope I didn’t offend you. Please accept my apologies. I’m really sorry for your loss.
Gran I hope your wish will materialise.
Pray for healthy years for yourself and it shall happen, prayers can be powerful 🙏💕
17th February 2020 at 9:45 am #97925
thank you hope life and joy, the funny thing is that i feel like a prisoner who was innocent but jailed for over 2 life sentances, and am now looking at the possibility of living a life by myself, my husband is older than me but there are no guarantees of who goes 1st, we had a large family but losing our youngest child in their 20s devestated our family and i worry about the mental health of them all. in some weird way not living my life seems to have kept me young, though i wouldnt advise anyone to live like that. i am still living in hope for my life to start there are so many things i want to acheive, so many things i want to do for the child who couldnt finish what they started, they were so talented and amazing and loved.i love your name by the way. love gran xx
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